Alex and the references

Hello from Project comment I'm here to go if a little criticism well not criticism thought some stuff on this piece but you did which is fun and interesting and definitely compelling and a simplistic way. The first thing I think when I see this piece is I automatically assume it's from some Syfy skit on the Cartoon Network what you really should be considered a good thing because it looks like a professional cartoon your mind it being called cartoon some people a little offended by this but really cartooning is just as artistic as any other art form some of my favorite artists cartoons Shel Silverstein I forget the name of the guy who did the peanuts you know Charlie Brown I love Bizarro Comics to they're not for everyone but I like it. So you're obviously telling a story here a young girl hearing the sounds of strange creatures trapped inside a compartment is it a spaceship a building a prison are these devious imps it's hard to tell however what is clear is that the girl is hearing their conversations on them pressing her ear against the tube her eyes wide with excitement and fear very webcomic vibe the creatures don't look too menacing but they could be devious when you really don't know I need the creatures designs a really great however the one thing I would have to say is it the creatures in the background don't have the same depth as the character what should be like that a little bit but the girl looks like she has better quality from a better quality artist than the background which is not something that ruins the peace entirely just giving you a heads-up for future notes this is intriguing Darkly humorous piece and I hope we can see more of this character in the future I'm sure you put a lot of love and effort into it someone to congratulate you for pulling off a good piece of entertaining art peace.